“Towards Ecopedagogy” Synthesis
Has the wave of catastrophe already
hit or is it only on the verge of hitting our world? Some may say that this
wave hit a long time ago; some may say that there is no such wave and we are
all just a bunch of radical, ludicrous thinkers. To those who question the wave
of catastrophe I say take a look around; there is oil dispersed throughout the
Gulf’s waters, our Arctic glaciers are practically gone, many animals are going
or have gone extinct, the world is faced with a heavy economic crisis, and
greed has defaced the population more so than ever. The wave of catastrophe has
yet to hit, but every day society see the remnants brought forth by this
oncoming wave.
In Kahn’s paper Towards Ecopedagogy,
he mentions our society as a transitioning technocapitalism society that is a
threat to organisms and their environment. I took this comment to great lengths
of thought asking, “What exactly is a transitioning technocapitalism society?”
I came to a consensus that Kahn is referring to a free market that is solely
reliant on its technology and rapid expansion. The common person would probably
see no problem with this type of society at all; however, there is a huge problem.
In a society that is comprised of technological sufficiency the rate of growth
is highly inclined. With a high rate of growth, the people, the animals, and
the environment suffer. The more people there are in the world, the more the
world’s resources are exhausted. Most of the resources that exist in our world
are limited; therefore it’s important that we watch what we are doing and watch
the rate at which we consume our resources. Kahn goes on to make many important
points in his paper; such as, living beings and organic habitats are being
culled and destroyed for human production of goods, tree consumption for paper
products has doubled over the last forty years, and throughout the oceans, global
fishing also has doubled resulting in a recent report finding that
approximately 90% of the major fish species in the world’s oceans have
disappeared. These statistics are truly fascinating; the people of today’s
world need to take a good look around and realize what they and not take it for
granite. Our nation is extremely fortunate to have the lifestyle it has; there
are many people around the world that would kill for it.
The world is a gruesome place; we have
vast fields of slaughterhouses for fast food chains, we attack our forests with
heavy machinery all for the sake of some paper, and we pollute our world’s air
with millions of factories. The fact of the matter is that people know the
world is being destroyed, and the problem is nobody cares. Man’s greatest flaw
is his greed and with this flaw comes the great downfall of civilization. In
life we are all given an opportunity to do the right thing when time calls for
it, and now is the time. Do the right thing and don’t be the cause, but instead
be the solution.
Two grammatical errors are at the end of the second paragraph, you need to include a have to make the sentence read " these statistics.....and realize what they they have." Second correction would be to change granite to granted. Other than those corrections it was a well written piece, you had good topic sentences. Your ideas were well formulated with examples from the article which is key in research papers. Good last paragraph with summing up your ideas.
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